The comedian

The comedian

A Story by writ rajat
"

Hope can make you laugh

"
Talking less laughing more,
A man foundon seashore,
This man is good from heart's core,
1. To. 3. 4. ,
Numbers because four is rhyming word of core
In his smile there is something which is mixed ,
Once you see him your smile will be fixed,
Below I am going to write something different,
From 1 to 3.4.5...........…6,
I know my poem will not catch reviews,
I want to say that I love you,
I want a knife to say ,
I will not Say okay,
Ok if you are insisting I have to say,
That line number 1 to 3 is for
five ,
Please left a note if you are virtually alive

© 2017 writ rajat



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Really great poem, it hits a steady beat throughout with some great phrases! Great work!

Posted 2 Months Ago


writ rajat

2 Months Ago

thanksaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Silly and fun. Nice little piece. :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


I enjoyed it good work :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


The comedian is always the first one to get killed off
Whether he is in love
or just trying out that mic
Testing 1,2, 3
he gets shoed off
sucks

I liked the satire here

Posted 5 Months Ago


writ rajat

5 Months Ago

Thanks .....

.
Nice. Read something refreshing!
And laughed too! 😁

Posted 5 Months Ago


writ rajat

5 Months Ago

Nice one to know thanks
Yeah, it was funny, keep it up.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Hahaha it was indeed funny. Well written and yeah you made me laugh. Keep writing :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


writ rajat

5 Months Ago

THANKS................................................................................................ read more
Interestingly funny;-]--- HA!HA!

Posted 5 Months Ago


writ rajat

5 Months Ago

Thanks ......
Lol, haha! It was indeed a funny, light hearted poem!
Well done, keep it up :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


writ rajat

5 Months Ago

Thanks .........

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Added on June 24, 2017
Last Updated on June 24, 2017

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writ rajat
writ rajat

patna, bihar, India



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