Words too Kind

Words too Kind

A Poem by Amber Zoe

Words too Kind
 
Belligerence from a reasonable mind
To try and make them understand
There is no place for words too kind
When violence is what their book demands
For innocence of those too blind
A false prophet’s irrational commands
For Your love they need to find
Please shine Your light on me today  
 
Torment of a questioning mind
Find words to make them understand,
There is no place for words too kind
When evil makes such vile demands
Wide awake but to be so blind
When actions interpret dark commands
For Your grace I’ll help them find
Because Your love shines on me today


© 2017 Amber Zoe



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The poem made me think. I believe in this new world. There is no room for kindness. Which is sad. People fighting for centuries and most don't know why anymore?
"For Your grace I’ll help them find
Because Your love shines on me today "
I liked the above lines. We do need kindness, concern and grace in this world. Thank you Kaeridwyn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


nice poem i really enjoyed reading it

Posted 7 Months Ago


This is wow! Strong imagery! Powerful narrative/message! and impressive musicality (even though it gets a bit wonky in merely two lines in Stanza 1....lines 4 and 6, but 6 more evidently than 4). Very well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago



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