Uncertain

about my confused experiences with life and failure to understand what i am heading towards

It feels like I'm always in a rush
I'm doing a lot yet left so much
I don't know where I'm heading to
just running I'm just through

I just want to close my eyes
may should I relax a while
I guess Frost just said it right
We all are fighters we have to fight

Woods may be lovely, dark and deep
even though there are no promises to keep
I just can't stop by the grooves
because you know its lot to prove

I took the road less traveled
no regret but i feel crippled
there no way to go back
How many times do i pack unpack?

Author's Note

I'm just a beginner but I want to go a long way..

Reviews

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love the allusions to Frost and his work... one of the most difficult things to do nowadays is to slow down, to unpack for the long haul and simply enjoy what life offers us... we have so many things pulling at us in different directions that it is difficult to see beauty around us when all we catch are blurred glimpses of life as it passes us by... your poem has inspired deep thought, Kajal...thanks for sharing!

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much for such a great review

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you are welcome!

[Indra Neil]

Thoughts, feelings and emotions are very well expressed in this fine write! Well done!
You might consider to edit 'wood' to 'woods'

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much

[Indra Neil]

u r most welcome!

[Mayank]

I liked the last 4 lines, I understand Uncertainty and I still feel uncertain while taking decisions, that's life. You need to stop for a while, clear clouds in your head and move ahead. I will suggest you to read some more material, which will enhance your writing skills... nice work.

[Kajal Sharma]

hey.... well thanks I am not like experienced at all...but writing stuff makes me feel so good...thanks for the advice I'll surely read more when I m done with my exams

[A. Amos]

As a beginner this was well written piece, my advise read as much as you can. It will help you to educate yourself!

[A. Amos]

As a beginner this was well written piece, my advise read as much as you can. It will help you to educate yourself!

[A. Amos]

As a beginner this was well written piece, my advise read as much as you can. It will help you to educate yourself!

[kollaboratyve]

This poem has a great beginning,the first five lines flow well....Let me gives you some constructive words,try not too write so much with your thoughts ,but with your heart.I am still learning also.You have promise!