Close your eyes

Close your eyes

A Poem by Kajal Sharma
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about love and the distances

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I know long distances are hard for me and you
And we know there is nothing we can do
Still we take our times out 
Because we just can't live without

Just close your eyes and what u see
I'm with you and you're with me
Hold me tight we're meant to be
Without you I feel so lonely

When we met, way you looked at me
and everything goes perfectly
and then I even love you more
one and two and three and four
you raise the power to infinity 
because our love is eternity

Just close your eyes and what u see
I'm with you and you're with me
Hold me tight we're meant to be
Without you I feel so lonely

But then its time we realize 
Its dark night, oh your dark eye
Hugging and kissing and love bites
But its time to say goodbye

Just close your eyes and what u see
I'm with you and you're with me
Hold me tight we're meant to be
Without you I feel so lonely

Then you say baby please don't go
But I can't stay no more
You hold my hand so tight 
Then i say it right 

Just close your eyes and what u see
I'm with you and you're with me
Hold me tight we're meant to be
Without you I feel so lonely...


© 2014 Kajal Sharma



Author's Note

Kajal Sharma
Straight from my heart to my pen and then on to the paper

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Kind and sweet words for love.
"Just close your eyes and what u see
I'm with you and you're with me"
True love is never fair. Sometime we need the memory of a love missed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really admire ur talent....
D way u exprsd ur feelings, it ws gd nd detaild, nd flowd nicely nd perfectly...
A gd write....
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kajal Sharma

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much arjun
And then to the Reader's heart.....
This is so Cute Kajal....
Love- something without which we can't live.....
This is an amazing one...i loved it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kajal Sharma

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rajat
Rajat malik

2 Years Ago

My pleasure #Youarewelcome
Just close your eyes and what u see
I'm with you and you're with me.

Touching and beautifully creation. You know it is the true love.
Love it/ like it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kajal Sharma

2 Years Ago

thank you saddam...its always 'butterflies in stomach' to fall in love
Saddam

2 Years Ago

Yes.... colorful butterflies....
Most welcome dear...
Kajal Sharma

2 Years Ago

hahaha........
You must have a heart full of love. Such a sweet poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

I'm not into poems so much as you, but would you read mine, it's "Dear dark angel".
Kajal Sharma

2 Years Ago

i will sure and if you don't like poems read a story called "threads" and "freak out"
Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

I sure will
awwwww

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kajal Sharma

2 Years Ago

hahaha...but you tomboy how you like romantic stuff..:P
Swathi Praveen

2 Years Ago

haha...! tomboys do have feelings :D They do fall in love , They too feel the pain...they are just g.. read more
Kajal Sharma

2 Years Ago

i myself am not too girly ....great talking to you...:)
so damn romantic.....

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lovely :)
Its beautiful, the author's note perfectly fits in.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Your write-ups are mostly related to love stories??

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kajal Sharma

2 Years Ago

no not really check out the one titled "kill your girl child"
Oh...this is awesome! submit it to the groups page. My favorite lines "Close your eyes and what u see, I'm with you, and you're with me."
I can relate to this, lovely write. 100 points, and a one way ticket to my favorites. :) keep it coming.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kind and sweet words for love.
"Just close your eyes and what u see
I'm with you and you're with me"
True love is never fair. Sometime we need the memory of a love missed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kajal Sharma
Kajal Sharma

India



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My name is Kajal Sharma. I love to do anything in which i can be creative. My interests are writing, reading, drawing, cooking, karaoke, dancing. I started writing when I was 12 years old. My love for.. more..

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