kill your girl child !

It is satirical poem based on condition of women in India

Kill your girl child

Kill her because this world is wild

Kill her because there is no place for her in society

Kill her because she is going to be eve teased 

Kill her because she might be raped

Kill her because she has no choice of marriage

Kill her because she might fall in love

Kill her because she has to wear what wont seduce men

Kill her because her husband might beat her

Kill her because she might get divorced

Kill her because she go mad out of depression

Kill her because she might depend on you or him

Kill her because she might study and be wiser than her man

that he might have inferiority complex

As she has no right and say in her decisions 

It is high time to understand 

that she might be a stain 

Kill her before it pains

Kill your girl child...!! 

Author's Note

Its just a little effort to describe that it is hard out there for women. If you really like it please review it...

Reviews

[zainul]

Kazal,your frustration and anger have correctly identified the inhumane attitude of our society.
Let's denounce all culprits(both men and women) who are responsible for such rude treatments
to girls.
Let's also support those people who are sincerely striving to overcome the situation.

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much

[Surya pradha]

very powerful. it makes my blood boil when i think about it. great work.

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much...

[Dara]

So sad to think of how young girls and women are still treated in some parts of the world. You have done an excellent job of calling attention to this affliction with a powerful, emotional write. Well done!

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much for your views dara..:)

[Phil Roberts]

Very powerful words that needed to be written and ought to be read. A very important and relevant topic. Your words are emotional but still controlled. Excellent work. well done ! : )

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much

[Shweta Shah]

Your words struck the chord!
The vivid description of the infernal life of women,the intended sarcasm,the notion of her being smarter and moving ahead,mandatory submissive attitude...all are expressed with a touch of conciseness.
Life isn't for everyone! Specially women...
Good job!

[Kajal Sharma]

I am glad you liked it :)

[....................]

Your words ache with truths and leave one sad and angered that parts of the world still treat women like this...it is hidden beneath the guise of religion and tradition, however, it is purely a controlling mechanism where women are treated as commodities and objects...you expose the ugly truth about the treatment of women; well-done!

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much

[Saddam]

Best described on the Honor Killing.
It is hit of a hammer on those who killing the girl.
Great write dear friend.

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much

[Eliot Knight]

...Hits right home. Life for a woman is frustrating and she is always on the defensive. Heartbreaking, yet insightful, very well done.

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much elliot

[Ben Noah Suri]

I can understand that it is frustrating at times to be a girl child but then the solution does not lie in killing the girls. Either kill the Men or liberate / educate them

[Kajal Sharma]

ohh no no you didn't quite get it....it was a satire...it really doesn't say to kill girls

[Ben Noah Suri]

Oh no! Looks like you didn't quite get it....My comment was satirical.....

[Kajal Sharma]

okay well then thank you

[Indra Neil]

powerful and raw write! the anger, anguish and frustration are powerfully reflected in this dark poem!

[Kajal Sharma]

thank uh so much for the wonderful comments

[Indra Neil]

u r most welcome!

[Sultrysoul]

Wow loss for words really powerful

[Kajal Sharma]

Really nice to know your views

[Sultrysoul]

U r welcome