Simple

This is a Tanka poem

Simple is not understood 

Still simple things are wonderful

But stay away

For Pain has no mercy on you

No matter how strong your heart may be

Author's Note

I have never done poetry before so if you could give me some tips that would help. This is also a Tanka poem.

Reviews

[TheLonelyKnight]

well not bad for a first time ^~^ hmm anime fan huh?? ( obviously xD ) i can give u some tips ^~^ ( that is IF u want) xD