The Curve - Changing Shape

'Curve' signifies the smile, or to be specific the shape of it.

I wake up when the sun comes,
and so does the desperation,
to rise up and realize the dreams,
I jump off the bed with expectation.

I walk through the door,
in the eternal glow,
with the curve at its peak,
and riding on the floor.

The sun rises up to the face,
the day starts taking its shape,
and the curve struggles,
to stay at its place.

By the moment the fire moves,
to the top of the head,
the curve gets weak and looses,
all the power that it had.

When the sun starts burning the back,
gravity beats the curve and the head,
the brain starts searching the sack,
to find the missing piece of puzzle...
I wish I had.

Reviews

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Well Done! Keep it up! Do u read mine 2 TIME if possible then gives ur review..

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Stunning write. Great thoughts. Nicely done!

[Amila Jay]

Wow. This is an amazing write :))

[Groovy]

nice poem

[Mockingbird]

sublime imagery of someone waking up and his day is going the way he excpected it to go.but then the sun hits him in the head and he realizing that he must go on a quest today to find the missing piece to complete his life. ( ? )

[TPK Stories]

loved the photo of the missing puzzle piece...good write...

[msharma]

great style of writing.I felt the whole scenario in front of my eyes,waking up in the morning, the routine schedule..etc. beautiful ending.

[Thea]

That was a really great poem...Really interesting...
:)))

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I adore this!