"I Have Found It"

I posted another poem that was a little more blunt and negative...I wanna change that perception so I started with this.

Swift breezes carry delicate leaves on a journey,
of spiraling ups and mysterious downs.

Seemingly endless night of troubles are broken,
by the sharp warmth of the rising sun;
florescence is exuberant in its glory along the horizon.

Sweet reminiscing being done across the world each night,
remaining but memories that are cherished for an eternity.

The soft breath of their sacred loved ones,

hug the bank of their necks,

and warm them thoroughly,

keeping tranquility.

 

Sweet sounds of nature carress temperate ears,

soothing deep and keeping the meaning of life still visable.

 

To live;

to cherish once more;

and to be yourself in a world of imposters.

Author's Note

ignore grammar and spelling please.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Nice images, beautiful expressed and felt.

[vaishnavi]

Sounds good! Yeah, well said :) ..I like the concept. May you you should write something more on it. All the best!

[Shadow_Self]

I like it alot. It explains many things, and the word flow was great.

[that-little-green-monst..]

Really nice poem. The word flow is great and I really love your word choice. I think you did a wonderful job with this poem!