Mirror

Your eyes shadowed

they look so lifeless and grey

it looks as if you keep your tears at bay

 

You walk/ your life looks so dead

you talk/ but nothing is going in your head

 

Are you waiting for someone to save your soul

your pain is taking it's toll

 

your friends watch as you die inside

your tears have no where else to hide

 

your eyes shadowed with so much pain

your look just drives me insane

 

you tell everyone your fine

but your just a mirror and those eyes are mine

 

 

Reviews

[Elizabeth Thief]

Wow it's very good. Very deep and intense. Again great job!!!

[Wildecat]

This is a splendid write, there are probably lots of us who can relate to this poem at one time or another in our lives. Well done.