Who am' I?

I got a headache today

Bled once, bled all the way

Pocket full of pills and head filled with lust!

Did I leave you in disguise?

You should have stayed realistic

I’m just an unstable sadistic

Trying to detach what I can’t feel

Pouring poison in wounds that can’t heal!

 

Counting numbers that don’t comply

It only equals zero, so what am’ I?

Today it feels like my heart bled out!

Pumping out blood filled with doubt

Instead of letting my future stand

I bury my head inside the sand!

But I guess that a debatable content

To any malcontent

I’m searching for any solution

But all I find is a convolution

Shade some light on your defection

Because everything sounds like confection

Looking for any direction

That doesn’t lead right back to my reflection

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I try to walk a mile

 In this tragic dark

I’m in denial

To find the end when I lost the start!

 

Paper skin

Marked with distain

Try to Pretend

That I’m not in pain

 

Looking through this mist of confusion

Everything feels like a lie

Running into another dead end is just the conclusion

So who am’ I?

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Sometimes we feel we are lost... not knowing why we are here, and how can we determine what we want in life. emptiness....it's totally dark. I hope you'll see the light.

[WhatsHerFace]

Wow, thats amazing. I love how you rhymed it all. My fave part: Paper skin Marked with disdain, Try to pretend That I'm not In pain.

[MiidniightSoul]

Wow...a very powerful and dark poem. Very beautifully written. Very good.

[Krista]

I liked it alot. Its very well written. I don't know what my favorite part was as I liked it all. Good Job

[Vin]

This was great, I especially liked
"I’m just an unstable sadistic
Trying to detach what I can’t feel
Pouring poison in wounds that can’t heal" and
"I'm in denial
To find the end when I lost the start!"
Well done!

-Beth

[deeps]

I like how this is set up and broke down.
This is a very well written write here.
I like this alot.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

I like the fact that you separated the poem into parts it sounded the different but with the same passion.
Great poem keep up the work and the passion.

[Rose Downing]

Not bad! Not bad at all! I like that you seperate the 1st part from the 2nt part. They look like diffrent poems, but have the same emotion.

[Dupree]

Wow. Impressive. Very Impressive.

[MagiCrystal]

You entangled me in the 1st. line, then you when on with those words that provoke me to digest this poem.
I got a headache today

Bled once, bled all the way

Pocket full of pills and head filled with lust!

Did I leave you in disguise?

You should have stayed realistic

I’m just an unstable sadistic

Trying to detach what I can’t feel

Pouring poison in wounds that can’t heal!

Now this is genius... 100% Magical. A Real Sadist
The wording.. it's exhilarating , rushing of my blood into my mind.
Pulsating, beats, pain is real!