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A certain ringing.
    In my head.
    In my heart.
    In my eyes.
    In my everything.
I think it’s because of what you did.
    The flowers.
    The love.
    The trip.
    The other girl.
I can’t stop thinking.
    About you.
    About me.
    About what I should do.
    About how I should do it.
Something has to be done.
    Because of what happened.
    Because of how you made me feel.
    Because of what it did to me.
    Because.

Author's Note

Wrote this real quick to see if I could write something I liked since I haven't been able to recently. It's weird and written so quickly, but I think it turned out somewhat okay. I have written some other things that I might upload that I don't love, but need some feedback on, so give me a break! Hope y'all all had a good Christmas (or whatever you celebrate) and have a good New Year!

Reviews

[Tamika Finley]

Kind of sullen but relatable in many ways. Good write

[K.]

Thank you for reading!

[Tamika Finley]

No problem

[Adam Adams]

Short little furious write that impacts the heart with rapidity. Your emotions're being glistening through words. Nicely pen'd up!

[K.]

Thank you! I'm glad it came across that way. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

[Adam Adams]

Pleasure's mine.
I'm just leafing through your insightful poetry pagers & figuring out how wondrous heaven you've created across your page. Very impressive! I'll be around your pages.. in 'bout no time!

[K.]

Wow! What a compliment, thank you so much! I appreciate it more than you can imagine!

[wordman]

a great write with all it`s pain how bout because for a title,or you we`re my everything

[K.]

Thank you for reading!

[Cody Williams]

The writing is fine. Some stories/poems are sometimes like that in the way that they run themselves off quicker and easier. Thanks for sharing this Kassie!

-CW

[K.]

Thank you Cody! I agree!

[Craig2591]

I like it. The sense of mystery about what happened and what's going to happen because of it. I think it's well written.

[K.]

Yay! I'm glad something finally worked out for me! Thanks for reading and reviewing Craig!

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of emotion and thoughts in the poem. I like the internal thoughts leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[K.]

Thank you so much Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.