Soda Crackers

Soda Crackers

A Poem by Kathy Van Kurin
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delightful experience with fascinating birds as they come to feast on soda crackers.

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Soda Crackers

Shared morsels at wood's edge,
yes I have!
crispy bits of soda crackers. 

Spotted towhee, pine chipmunk,
 little mouse-

 come to visit for their own
little share and nibble.

They enter without hesitation
for this table laid out.

Here and gone but word gets out.

The feast is readily attended
 by others like them,

nothing lost.

Neither a word spoken nor a
 gripe displayed,

Simply consumed
 at lightning speed.


© 2017 Kathy Van Kurin



Author's Note

Kathy Van Kurin
Any ideas about content or context? Experiences with critters anyone else?

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The Creator gave us birds so we could understand the difference between walking pon uneven stone or being carried in arms that never bruise. Tis same with scurrying sniffers!

Those creatures you feed in your garden - not all familiar to me, must have varying personalities plus an instinctive sense of survival. How delightfully satisfying for them =- and their happy audience! Wonderful words, Kathy sketched in such charming stanzas.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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emmajoy

4 Months Ago

For me, right or wrong, every eperience, thought, dream - good and bad-ish is part of an erratic lea.. read more
emmajoy

4 Months Ago

Must learn to spell treAsure!


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a beautiful site to see,critters coming over for dinner,maybe ad some cheese and a bag of deer corn,,no wine please,birds don`t fly well on wine

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kathy Van Kurin

3 Months Ago

Wordman,
Your great! "birds don't fly well on wine." Yes, thanks I will surly remember that. .. read more
 wordman

3 Months Ago

but i do,lol
The Creator gave us birds so we could understand the difference between walking pon uneven stone or being carried in arms that never bruise. Tis same with scurrying sniffers!

Those creatures you feed in your garden - not all familiar to me, must have varying personalities plus an instinctive sense of survival. How delightfully satisfying for them =- and their happy audience! Wonderful words, Kathy sketched in such charming stanzas.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
emmajoy

4 Months Ago

For me, right or wrong, every eperience, thought, dream - good and bad-ish is part of an erratic lea.. read more
emmajoy

4 Months Ago

Must learn to spell treAsure!
Kathy,
I enjoyed your poem. I think you covered this feast well. My wife and I feed the critters behind our house. It is joyful and relaxing to watch them.
Your poem had a easy playful flow to it.
Richie b.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

richie b
"easy and playful" I like that! Yes little song birds are so quick in thier movement.. read more
a delight and playful. this is the good stuff of life.

Made me think of: "Look at the birds of the air: They do not sow or reap or gather into barns — and yet your Heavenly Father feeds them. Are you not much more valuable than they? Who of you by worrying can add a single hour to his lifespan?"

Posted 1 Year Ago


Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

Pete,
Oh the words of Jesus mean so much! These feathered creatures are something that are in.. read more
This is a familiar scene....it happens to me everyday.

Flocks of Rainbow lorikeets that come tapping at the kitchen window for their daily feed. Add Galahs, Myrna's, Cockatoos and Pigeons, and it becomes a regular meeting of the breeds!

A nice write; grounded in realism and experience.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

Doodley,
I cannot say I have had such an experience as you relate in your review. What it mu.. read more
It is truly a pleasure and privilege to share a little time and a few crackers with nature's wondrous creatures as they go about their busy lives!

A beautifully construed nature poem, privileged indeed!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

Tom,
When a heart is just free to be. Do we care about outward strain? Give me a free flowing.. read more
love your quick and fun and meaningful poem as a young girl I loved feeding the pedgens on the boardwalk of Atlantic City peanuts from the peanut store there.. fast they consumed and more and more came
a great feeling I loved your poem you do justice to giving food to small wee animals thank you

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

Marilyn,
Thanks. This poem came of a sunny hope filled day. I was visited by a darling pine c.. read more
marilyn 1225

1 Year Ago

Happy Thanksgiving to you too Kathy you have a very good heart also talent for writing a grea.. read more
Every night I sit out on the porch and watch all the critters. I love how you described it, all the different little guys coming out to their feast

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

Thanks D. connolly, Glad you can enjoy your porch like that! Fun for sure; you are blessed .. read more
Nice write and one I experience daily. Feeders are out in front and birds of all types feed. In the back deer and turkey feast on grain. Lots of animals in a large space. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

valentine,
Very nice to find a common enjoyment with another. Thanks for sharing and for rea.. read more
i very much enjoy this scene you have played out for me .. i especially like the third couplet :) serene, cute, gracious mix of humanity and the forest ..love it!
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

Thanks Einstein Noodle,
Just love the small ones so much. They are so quick and delightsome.... read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

my wonderful Norma spent about a year getting a squirrel to take food from her hand .. such a treat .. read more

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Tags: chipmunk, feast, woods, lightning, soda crackers, attended, I, table, visit, yes, spotted towhee, mouse, share, nibble

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