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A Poem by k.m.b.

Feelings are rather peculiar, don’t you think?


How do these chemicals running through my body cause such real hurt and such pure joy? 


Where do feelings take place anyhow? 

Some may say in the brain

or in the heart


But when I feel

I feel everywhere


I feel happiness from the top of my head to the tip of my toes

 

I feel sadness turning in my chest and swelling in my eyes

 

I feel anger’s burning heat in my head, trying to find its way out my mouth


I feel excitement bouncing off the walls of my stomach


I feel angst rushing down my arms and my legs 

making it hard to move


My feelings take place in my bones

they take place in my muscles and in my lungs


Oh do I look forward to the day the happiness is so great it illuminates and warms my whole being

But I also fear that someday the sadness or the anger may be so strong that it will leave me in a pile of dust


My feelings are felt everywhere

so please be careful with me

© 2016 k.m.b.


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Poetry and I have been closest allies for many years dear kmb, and I've learned many forms to compose poetry in, even became a teacher of poetry, but I've never, nor have I ever, read or written the sensations of "feelings" more concisely or excellently expressed than you have here.

Gosh, I love this sooo much … so much, in fact, it expresses exactly and precisely how my own feelings are felt.
Smiles 'n hugs of many thanks to you for sharing You, dear lady-poet! ⁓ Richard

Posted 8 Years Ago


A beautiful for the emotion of love.
"My feelings are felt everywhere
so please be careful with me"
True love should be gentle and kind. A well written for the want of love and kindness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


You may be new to this, as am I, but the emotions are definitely there. Reading this elicited an emotional response and after all isn't that what it is all about?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

k.m.b.

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad the words made you feel something. They definitely mean a lot to me.

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