Impasse

Impasse

A Poem by SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
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Should I stay or should I go

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Deciding what to do is hard
it's not just from your head
Toss around the pros and cons
of all the things we said

My way is what's good for me
You have other plans
Pressure building all the time
That's just how it stands

I have things that cannot change
You have your piles too
Can sit and stew for hours now
on what we need to do

Love plays parts that cause us pain
Half empty is the glass
You won't budge and we create
a sorrowful impasse.




© 2014 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge



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Expectations from those that we love tearing us apart because we cannot live up to these expectations and even going as far as to state that our expectations could quite possibly be what they regard with disappointment. To each their own, I say, and I must say that the impasse (I see where you've got the name now) and striving for a detente you portray are both so poignant and very well-written. Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

3 Years Ago

thank you Tai for the review and you have even a sense of poetry in your reviews! excellent



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There is nothing better than reading and feeling your mind expand, pondering all kinds of thoughts. Once again, i loved this

Posted 3 Years Ago


SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

3 Years Ago

Very kind of you to stop by and say such nice things
I believe at some point in our lives we all have been through exactly what your poem states! The flow was awesome!

Posted 3 Years Ago


SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your review. You are so right. Not always easy to make everyone happy. There are ti.. read more
imagination101

3 Years Ago

You are welcome!
Expectations from those that we love tearing us apart because we cannot live up to these expectations and even going as far as to state that our expectations could quite possibly be what they regard with disappointment. To each their own, I say, and I must say that the impasse (I see where you've got the name now) and striving for a detente you portray are both so poignant and very well-written. Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

3 Years Ago

thank you Tai for the review and you have even a sense of poetry in your reviews! excellent
Been there before..I like that the poem is not predictable and it's perfect intersection of self reflection with outer expression makes the unknown a clear point..good piece

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your nice review... glad you liked
That is always a tough decision when you love someone but you are not sure if you are still right for one another, the question is can you accept each others differences without hurting one another.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

3 Years Ago

Thanks of the comments Advice to a friend in a tough spot. Love does make it hard to make decision.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Buffalo, NY



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