Friends Don"t

Friends Don"t

A Poem by SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
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What is worse - your man cheating on you or your best friend that lets it happen?

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You broke my heart
put it in your hand and twisted
Pulled it right apart.

All the times we shared
secrets with heads together like teens
No details spared

You and me learning when
sadly, husbands weren't forever right?
Tried on life again

Not much I wouldn't do for you
Drove your drunken a*s home
Haha - you drove mine home too

Kids teaching us respect
world saying its okay to play
strife leaving its effect

I met him and fell hard
Like I was sixteen and full of love
We sat there in the yard...

You told me kinda sad
How he asked you to try him out
Was it really all that bad?

Yes, it was - can't pretend
The two of you - in my shiny place
The X and My Best Friend...
Why?




© 2014 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge



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ouch!! ultimate betrayal... double whammy that takes your heart and rips it out raw and bleeding... what a powerful, emotional write that reaches out and smacks the reader with emotion.. I can only imagine how this feels, but I know as a reader, it hurt to read it... pain is palpable.... I am sorry for the place this comes from but it is poignantly expressed... wheeeew..

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Such an honest piece, glad i read it : )

Posted 3 Years Ago


Thanks for your review. We are placed on this earth and we are given challenges... it just really hurts sometimes when you think you know someone and you think, as we do, how could someone do something like this.... So, try him on like the old shoe he is....

Posted 3 Years Ago


ouch!! ultimate betrayal... double whammy that takes your heart and rips it out raw and bleeding... what a powerful, emotional write that reaches out and smacks the reader with emotion.. I can only imagine how this feels, but I know as a reader, it hurt to read it... pain is palpable.... I am sorry for the place this comes from but it is poignantly expressed... wheeeew..

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Buffalo, NY



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Some of my work is very personal and some is flight taking fancy... a writer's prerogative... :) Read something of mine and I will read something of yours - very nice and simple and what a way.. more..

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