Smile

A smile filled with happiness,
A smile thats worth seeing,
I wish I could smile like that.


Smiling can make others know,
That you're okay.


But then,
When I smile,
My friends always ask,
Whats wrong with me.


They see Im not okay.


My smile, 
Is a sad one.


The life in my eyes,
Has disappeared.
My eyes look like the darkness,
That is in my heart.


And now all I can think about,
Is all the bad stuff in my life...


A smile,
That shines brightly like the sun,
I want to see one.


So that the darkness,
Will get out of me.
So that,
I can be happy,
Even just for a little while.


Because I really,
Need to be happy.
My life's all messed up,
Right now.
And I don't want it,
To be like that...


I wish I could wipe that sad smile,
Off my face.
Because I want to smile,
A happy smile...

Author's Note

Say whatever you want about this.

Reviews

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

I had to put this one in my library as a favorite. I like the simplicity and honesty of it. Heck, I even like the "say whatever you want about this" at the end. There's a sincerity in this poem~ you're not trying to sound cool and you're not being angsty. Very well done. I hope you keep writing poetry because you are very talented.

[kathrina]

Aww thanks for telling me, it means alot to me. :D Thanks for reading!

[Nightfall]

I think you've got bad way, i mean you've got something bad with ya, your heart i think has been broken by anyone...i'm saying because it reflects from your words...anyway, it's really a great poem...a suggesstion from me to ya, if you wanna smile, then believe on you...no one can make ya happy except ya...don't leave your heart alone in the world of crowd...there's so many who can hurt ya...

you said yu wanna smile....wait for my message...