Trust me..

Trust me..

A Story by Kayla Etreni

trust me, i know exclty how it feels, how you like him, a LOT, but every girls is all over him, and he lets them be all over him, and it bugs you like crazy, because you want him as more than a bestfriend., then he pulls a dick move, and you dont want to be mad cause your scared he wont chase you .. chase you to go back to being bestfriends.. so you have to pretend it didnt hapen, even thouhg its eating you up inside.. prety acuate right? dont tell me youve never felt this, because you have, every girl has, and maybe some guys. and let me tell you, it doesnt get better than this.

© 2012 Kayla Etreni


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Kayla Etreni
i dont care about spelling or anything. just tell me what you think.

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It gets much better... give it some time... this is just practice. After awhile you'll out grow the games and find someone who sees you for you. Then the real fun begins you'll enjoy every moment... don't get me wrong... you'll still fight, usually over little things like what temp the house should be or why the trash is still in the kitchen instead of at the curb... you’ll still get mad for no real reason... discover all the little things that makes us couples, lovers, and eventually parents. Oh yeah... it gets way better

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This was really good. It displays the emotions really well... or maybe not the emotions, but what is going on. But the way you word it, the way it is presented allows the reader to take a deep breath and dive in, uncover the hidden meaning behind this piece. And maybe it wasn't what you were thinking when you were writing this, maybe it's a completely new perspective, but maybe it was. We may not be able to get the whole picture, what exactly is going on in your head while you write this, but that's the fun in writing, it's a twisted, messed up way of thinking, way of putting down your thoughts, your soul into words. It's a mystery.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very astute and sympathetic summary of the situation. Tegon Maus is so right, though. The agonies of the teens and even twenties don't go on forever. Eventually we find someone who feels like 'home,' and loves us back.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It gets much better... give it some time... this is just practice. After awhile you'll out grow the games and find someone who sees you for you. Then the real fun begins you'll enjoy every moment... don't get me wrong... you'll still fight, usually over little things like what temp the house should be or why the trash is still in the kitchen instead of at the curb... you’ll still get mad for no real reason... discover all the little things that makes us couples, lovers, and eventually parents. Oh yeah... it gets way better

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dayum straight been through ont his great job though a capturing what almost every girl will have to go through which is sad

Posted 12 Years Ago


Truely realistic

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yep, it's good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love it

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 15, 2012
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Kayla Etreni
Kayla Etreni

Canada



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Heey im kayla :)! i am 13 years old :) Latley i have beeen writing, and i would apretiate it if you could look at my writing, maybe tell other friends on wriiterscafe (read requests) and so on? i writ.. more..

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