Gone

Gone

A Poem by that-little-green-monster
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Fictional poem.

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I'm nothing.
Well I am something,
But I am fading into oblivion.
Becoming nothing.

So if you think about it,
I am nothing.
I have nothing to work for,
I have no dreams.

And so now I continue my fade,
Into oblivion.
And before you know it,
I'm gone.

© 2012 that-little-green-monster



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even though it is very short, this poem brings out a lot of inspiration into the reader's mind. In a way we all fade away, just some sooner then others. You just proved that point in a very creative way.

Loved it :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like this. Nothing is redefined and reasserted in a new way each time you say it. It's somewhat like a "nothing" spell. Great work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I agree that this is relatable for some people. This is actually really good.
The title goes great with this, and the flow's outstanding.
:D



Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very relatable. Good work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


conveys despair and hopelessness. very sad.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A short but highly compact piece that relates well.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on May 23, 2012
Last Updated on July 18, 2012
Tags: Fiction, sad, depression, lose myself

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Hello! I am a high school student. I am a thespian and a writer. I hope to pursue a career in a creative field. I believe that words can have affect on people more than we could ever imagine. I don't .. more..

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