It's Mine

She will always be mine.

            Nothing will steal my love, for it’s my signal that tells me I’m still only human.

 I have the power to live.

It tells me that I am what I am and not even I can change that.

It's the memory I keep locked inside.

It’s my pride.

It’s my secret.

It’s mine

 

            Nothing will steal my anger, for my anger gives me a sense that I can make things better for myself in a world of people of higher powers.

It allows me to make myself noticed.

It's my placeholder.

It's my peace in chaos.

It's my piece of chaos.

It’s mine.

 

            Nothing will steal my pain, for my pain keeps me mortal.

If I lost pain, I would lose myself.

It tells me that something isn’t right.

It tells me it isn’t ever going to be right.

It’s my crippled bliss.

It’s my heartfelt nightmare.

It’s mine.

 

            Nothing will steal my sorrows, for they keep me learning from mistakes.

Without a lasting feeling as a punishment, I will never learn to better myself.

It’s my well secluded triumph.

It’s my payment.

It’s mine.

 

            Nothing will steal my heart, for it is already stolen.

It’s locked away in a darkened light surrounded by her love,

her anger,

her pain,

and her sorrows.

She is my breaking point.

She is my everything.

She is mine.

 

Reviews

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

Without our experiences of sorrow, hate, love, anger, jealousy, etc, we wouldn't be who we are today. You are obviously doing very well so you must be right. It seems like your lover helps you through things and you do the same for her. Alas love, so sweet, but a bitter after-taste.... I envy your special connection you have with this mystery woman, she seems great....or maybe you are kinda in the situation like in the the song "vermillion".....

peace,
may

[Adela Muresan]

Good ending (: , very touchy.
Yeah...I think many could find themselves in your poem. I like the way you embrace affection and pain, for the joy of knowing you are truly 'alive'.

A.M.

[~~~*-*~~~Kyra~~~*-*~~~]

aw~!!! T~T so emotional!!!!! i luv it!!! beautiful!!! bravo! BRAVO!!!!

[Wondering Mind]

Very emotional and powerful meanings with some very good expressions. Well penned and flows wonderfully. Great work!

[Alexander]

This is really amazing. I love the emotions it gives as I am reading. Keep writing.

[....]

Now this is a amazing piece of poetry, it has meaning I really like these lines right here;

It's my peace in chaos.
It's my piece of chaos.
It's mine.

Very well written write....Amy

[That Weirdo You Just Mi..]

AWW! I love this KBOB! I can feel your emotions from reading it and you can see bits and pieces of your personality shining through the words! I luvs this and I luvs you! Keep up the work! LeeLee