This Place Left Untouched

This Place Left Untouched

A Poem by kbob
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We all have different forms of heaven.

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This is where two hearts meet.

Walls are brought down mercilessly.

Pain is diminished and forgotten.

We can be left unfound.

 

This is where two souls come to crossroads.

Love is cast aside.

Hopeless to resist the tears.

The world doesn’t appear to stretch past here.

 

This is where broken hearts mend their wounds.

Lost faith is restored.

False hate withers away.

There is no illness here.

 

This is where two hearts reunite.

Forgiveness is adopted.

Love is reformed.

Nothing will break this once again.

© 2008 kbob


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this is beautifully written (:
amazing job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is where broken hearts mend their wounds.
Lost faith is restored.
False hate withers away.
There is no illness here.

Love these lines right here, this is a Awesome write with so much meaning.....Amy

Posted 15 Years Ago


This seems very confusing, but it makes sense in some type of way....
I wonder if you have ever been at this point, because you said it was untouched, or maybe it hasn't been disturbed, harmed, or disfigured. Nevertheless, the was a great foreshadow of your love, and is soothing to the soul. great job!!!!

peace,
may

Posted 15 Years Ago



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