Forever Trapt and Chained

Forever lost and trapt

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Waves crash against the shore

like hands beating on a drum - Consistent

 

Rain pours down in waves

like a pier during a hurricane - Never Ending

 

I am forever chained to this rock

Even though i hold the keys

 

I fell from Heavens grace

I'm trapped like Azazel

 

My love cannot come save me

for he cannot be spoken of

 

I had an affair with a forbiddin angel

For that i paid

 

The storm will never cease

for it is a reminder of my evil

 

He whose touch warmed me

is forever gone

 

The tender voice that carressed me 

is no more

 

I'm trapped here.

I cannot break free

 

Even if my love was....

An archangel 

Reviews

[Zachary_James]

nice work

[Mistaken]

Wow...simply amazing I love it!! The picture sets up the whole mood! I love deviant art its amazing

[nono]

Nice and so right! This is truly epic and FANTASTIC! It as well for me to say....That the flow in this was wonderful. One of your best keep it up!

[KaySea]

loved the pic.
nicely done

[JelliFyshKissUs]

My goodness! This is beautiful. Simple words to describe a complex feeling. Beautiful, beautiful work, my dear. So proud of this poem.

[Brad]

the read on this is exactly how the author must feel, the way it's constructed conveys the emotions of the writer

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

a never ending sounding flow along with the situation
the words seem almost tired as she's chained up
a good story with feeling

[Poetic Beauty]

I love this poem and the story you created for the character in the picture. It is a truly amazing what we can write from looking at a painting or a photo. The details are well done.

[justAnumber]

I love the use of consistent and never ending. Also, the Azazel reference is great. Again, thank you for sharing.

[Cynthia]

That's nice, and I enjoy reading this.
Love this one.