Deep in the sea

Deep in the sea

A Poem by kdpgrahi
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Love should be more deep than the sea

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Lips parted fresh from the fire
Touched each other with the delicate desire
The unrestrained waves active in the mouth
Lips smoothened its move towards south

The epochal dreams are made and broken
The mighty castles in the air shaken
The souls agitated to a higher rage
What the ultimate
The destiny is under the blaze
And blissfully everything receded to a haze
And the world turned into a new phase

© 2012 kdpgrahi



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this is great, i liked the rhythm.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very very nice. A good read. Wonderful write:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


It clearly describes the idea behind writing this one. Easy to grasp words and a simple write symbols of a excellent poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


It had nice flow, good job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


I really like this piece. It's very figuratively wrote and there's so much emotion put into it. Its as if I can feel everything you describe.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Seemingly simple and easy to read piece, it was like slipping from one cloud to another. Great job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your imagery is flawless here love! A beautiful display of how it should be, gorgeous! xoxo

Posted 5 Years Ago


really an enjoyable read. Well crafted!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


the best of yours I have ever read. Love you my sweet friend!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very nice picture you used for the poem. As for the poem itself; nice rhyming. I like the last two lines as well as this line here:
"The mighty castles in the air shaken"


Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on February 26, 2012
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