Beautiful Distraction

Beautiful Distraction

A Poem by Kiera Scanlon

You caught me off guard,
You took me by surprise,
The touch of your hand, 
That sparkle in your eye.

Lying in your arms,
We are the perfect match,
The distance is discouraging,
Yet I am still so attached.

Your breath on my neck,
The smell of your hair,
The naughtiness in your smile,
That strength in your stare.

Your warmth, your touch,
All worries subside,
As your sweet lips kiss mine,
Oh, that feeling inside.


And when I look into your eyes,
I see pure beauty with no disguise.


© 2014 Kiera Scanlon



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I liked the title and yet the reflective voice is apparent in the lines...as if you're saying these words in full array...I would edit down certain areas:


You caught me off guard,
You took me by surprise,
The touch of your hand,
That sparkle in your eye.

Lying in your arms,
We are the perfect match,
The distance is discouraging,
Yet still I am still so attached.

Your breath on my neck,
The smell of your hair,
The naughtiness in your smile,
That strength in your stare.

Your warmth, your touch,
All worries subside,
As your sweet lips kiss mine,
Oh, that feeling inside.


And when I look into your eyes,
I see pure beauty with no disguise.

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You caught me off guard,
Took me by surprise,
Touch of your hand,
Sparkle in your eye.

Lying in your arms,
We are a perfect match,
Distance is discouraging,
I am still so attached.

Your breath on my neck,
Smell of your hair,
Naughtiness in your smile,
Strength in your stare.

Your warmth and touch,
All worries subside,
As your sweet lips kiss mine,
Oh, that feeling inside.

And when I look into your eyes,
I see pure beauty with no disguise.


Of course --- this is just impo...do what makes you feel --- you...

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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"And when I look into your eyes,
I see pure beauty with no disguise."
This is beautiful! I loved the sentiments conveyed here!

Posted 11 Months Ago


A beautiful poem of love and desire crafted from the heart.

Posted 2 Years Ago


"pure beauty" indeed this is...can also be taken as the innocence of love before it gets weighed down by the world.

Posted 2 Years Ago


it is all about transparency, honesty. Good write :)
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Posted 2 Years Ago


A very simply sweet poem, well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this poem, true gold and perfection. As I read I felt the emotion behind every word and every line. I really enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. My favorite was:And when I look into your eyes,
I see pure beauty with no disguise.
This ending is really breathtaking and effective to the whole poem. It wraps it up in a good way. Great job again and thank you very much for sharing this very lovely poem.
Aphy

Posted 2 Years Ago


nice love poem!..........

Posted 2 Years Ago


A seductive and enjoyable read!

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is gold.
Your talent shows in this piece.
Im also a sucker for romantic writes.
This was so beautiful, heartfelt and romantic Just extremely sweet.
I hope you have shown the guy this is about, this poem, bet he would love it.
Your rhyming is even better here, its flawless, comes naturally, doesn't feel forced.
Im a big fan of your work.
Keep writing :)


Posted 2 Years Ago


I quite enjoyed this piece. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Kiera Scanlon
Kiera Scanlon

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