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A Poem by keiths ramblings

Triple trouble

Triplet sisters I once wooed
but one I wanted more
I think I fell in love with Hope
or was it Faith?
I never was quite sure

One day I spoke to Charity
At least I think I did
I said I loved
her sister Hope
and this is what I said

‘Hope will never love me
I think she’s heaven sent’’
‘Have faith’ she said
I'm still not sure

exactly what she meant!

© 2008 keiths ramblings

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Michael

It reads with the flow of a limerick and has the same playful feel. I like the way you turn things in on themselves. Even with the rhyme a bit forced (more - sure; did - said) it still reads extremely well.

It is hard to keep a good flow as you have. I look forward to reviewing more of your work.

Great Job!