Heartbreak Highway

Heartbreak Highway

A Poem by Lover Of Words

I let you enter 
In different ways then the others 
Just have the fire i felt 
blown out like the snapping of your fingers 
The twist and turns 
Of your heart break ties 
Has broken mine to no end 
No return 
Question of love 
Lost in the highway of us 
The ups 
The downs
Can my heart take much more 
On this road with this man 
Who ended my belief in love 
Will the travel of this heart break end 
I gave into your magic 
And i get blown out like the wind 
I will always question the hopes of us 
On this heart break highway 
I am stuck 
At a stand still 
with a non repairable heart 


© 2013 Lover Of Words



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You've managed to sum up my marriage with this piece. Wonderful!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Heartbreak....A s****y place to be, and many emotions to overwelming. And yet, so common is that place where we all go, often, more than once. Beautiful write, keep it up.
-Infinity

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Lover Of Words

4 Years Ago

Thank you
sometimes you just have to pull into a rest area and take a break from that highway of love...well penned, dear Kelsey.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Heartbreak hotel is a common place for the most of us. We give love with hope of forever and the gift will be return back to us. I like the description in the poem. I felt the disappointment. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Lovely. Just lovely. So much emotion in such a well-written poem. :)

It would make an amazing ballad ^^

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

4 Years Ago

I am very apprecaited of your reveiw i will see what i can do
Felicity's Eve

4 Years Ago

:) No pressure or anything. It's your poem ^^
"The twist and turns
Of your heart break ties
Has broken mine to no end
No return
Question of love "
A nice poem and those are my favorite lines...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reading :)
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)
give it some chords and a chorus and you've got a balled

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the advice :)

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Hi My name is Kelsey, I have a mild form of Cerbral Palsey and i did not choose to be given this but i live with it proudly I love sports sense i cant play them i like to watch them.. I do not judge .. more..

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