Behind The Truth

Wondering what God has in store 

For him and I 

Push us together 

Pull us apart 

Sitting here alone 

In the dark 

Alone questions circle my mind 

I let you slip from me 

Yet again 

Is there truth behind our love 

Could i have done something 

And you could be lying next to me 

Behind the truth 

Is my life 

I can not stand not knowing 

Love is like a mountain

Behind the truth 

Ill be waiting 

For a answer 

For as long as it takes

Years do not stop my love 

Neither does my heart 

 

Reviews

[KeelyJane]

Sometimes its hard to understand our fate. We dabble back and forth on whether or not we ever have a hand in it. This was a very good look into the confusion and the questions we often ask ourselves.
On a technical note, in the last few lines, "for a answer" should be "for AN answer"
Well done friend. Enjoyed the read as always and thanks for sharing

[Lover Of Words]

Nice pen Kels! I loved "I let you slip from me
Yet again " for it speaks so much in this write, wow.
Good to read you again! with love,

- Elisa

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you hun!

You're welcome sweetie x

[TPK Stories]

Love how you expressed the hope in love.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. Love is never controlled and we need to hold on to kindness. I like the hope and desire in the words. A very good ending to a excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you Coyote

[Felicity's Eve]

Love is quite an amazing concept to write about... Lovely. Just lovely. :)

100/100

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you Nora

[Felicity's Eve]

My pleasure ^^

[Baby Ricochet]

Love is like a lot of things. Good poem

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you baby

[Blue Lotus]

Love is like a mountain
Behind the truth
Ill be waiting ......... very powerful!

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you muchly

[Blue Lotus]

u wlc ......

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Love is like a mountain
Behind the truth
I'll be waiting
For an answer --beautiful lines...

This is a melancholy piece. So often we wonder what life has in store for us; even wish that there was a way to know what the outcome would be, but in reality the not knowing is what makes us human and gives us the ability to feel so deeply...at least this is how I feel. Nicely done.

[Lover Of Words]

I thank you very much

[Sami Khalil]

"Love is like a mountain
Behind the truth
Ill be waiting
For a answer
For as long as it takes
Years do not stop my love
Neither does my heart "
A very nice write....:)

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)