Path Of Mystery

Staring at the ceiling in the dark 

A missing piece in my heart 

Treading in the dark of the heart of mystery 

Leaving my soul in a trail of guilt 

Up down sideways any way 

You drag  within the scary places 

I see your a mystery, but 

Can you give me some sign

Are you a good or bad hurdle im about to face 

Your ghost like quality 

Your sneaky whispers 

You leave me shaking in my bones 

But yet you don't stay around long 

You shine your light among my face 

And only mine, Only i can see you 

Only i can hear and see you 

Your such a mystery 

But you stay close to my soul 

Touching my heart in no other ways 

Leaving marks around my surroundings 

Your life you left behind 

Or now all in secret code 

Just among my world

My mind, my body, my vision 

Your leading me somewhere 

Down a path that you wish for me to see 

Guide me in your dark mysterious  ways 

Ill fallow the light you leave 

Reviews

[TPK Stories]

I loved the mystery in this piece...looking for the hidden clues to someone and trying to answer them...well written...

[Cryingkate]

I agree with others that you have weaved some awesome lines in this. I love writings like this that others write where you gotta find the clues to what the writer was thinking of when they wrote something.
Is this about God ?

[Lover Of Words]

No its not... Its about my greatfather leaving me signs to witch i can only see

[Cryingkate]

I didn't quite think so But I would of never guessed a grandparent. If you ever felt like it, I would love to have you translate the poems meaning to grandfather.

[Lover Of Words]

There are alot of them in the mixture of my works as you go down the list... You will soon realize that he was my inspration for alot of my writes as well as my aunt whom brought me to this website

[Cryingkate]

Thanks for the extra info it will help me when I'm going along.
Ps. I'll be up and down all night going thru these so If you get tired go ahead and get some sleep too.
I've owed you this time for Quite a long time now, So I want to read as much as I can but you know what? I really needed this too. I was sad with frustration tonight and your writings are giving me peace and tranquility that I have needed for many months.
Thank you for all your postings,They were there for when I needed them (Now)

[Lover Of Words]

I will be around til late myself but i will eventually get some sleep... I am honored that my words can give you some peace and tranquity... Please do not feel like you have to rush though them all... Take your time... There are quite of bit of them...

[Cryingkate]

Actually I think your poems are gonna be my new medicine. I get so frustrated now a days . this diabetes is trying to win me over, but I'm a sissy either LOL.

[Cryingkate]

I meant I"M NOT A SISSY lol

[Lover Of Words]

Its not very often when i get someone telling me that my writings are there medication for something or another... If what i put down on paper helps you then i am honored

[Lover Of Words]

Haha i got that

[Anna Blackburn]

I really like this poem, I hope to read more like it. I did however, see some typos that you may want to revise. The last line says Ill instead of I'll. "I see your a mystery" the 'your' should be "you're" as in you are... It never hurts to have another watching for these sort of things I guess. I hope you write many more poems like this. Thank you for the read. :)

[David]

This was very nice, I enjoyed reading it. It's almost like I was captured in the mystery :P

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the artwork and the amazing poem. I like the feel of mystery and journey in the words.
"Can you give me some sign
Are you a good or bad hurdle im about to face
Your ghost like quality
Your sneaky whispers "
I like the above lines. Good to question what comes into the nights. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

A little dark and mysterious poem ...So many good lines to quote...Bravo.................

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you kindly

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome kindly...:)..........

[Tea]

You call feel the emotions in this poem. Love the way you described it.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much

[Tea]

Your welcome.

[Calissa Knox]

This is a very haunting, and mysterious poem. I love the emotion, and depth you put into it.

My favorite line is, "A missing piece in my heart
Treading in the dark of the heart of mystery".

This poem has great artistry, and you painted a very vivid picture with the words.
It is very vivid, yet very mysterious.

This is a unique piece of writing with a lot of charisma.
It cut through to the depths of my soul. Fantastic write!

[Lover Of Words]

thanks for the awesome review

[Calissa Knox]

You're welcome, Kelsey!