The Asylum

Screams

Bloodcurdling,reverberating off the walls

 Arms

Reaching,pulling at the bars

Blood

Staining,fills your nostrils

Souls

Damned,trapped and tormented

Death

In every room,putrid

Minds

Overflowing with chaos, currupt

Pain

In every pore, torturing

Terror

strong

Insanity

certain 

Reviews

[zainul]

Splendid write.
Like its structure and strength.

[Kacie Delane Davis]

I value your opinions :)

[**AngelicDemon**]

This is now one of my favorite poems

[Kacie Delane Davis]

That means so much to me. :)

[Tina Kline]

Very dark and gripping. The horror is intense. A strong poem. Love the layout
that you used. Excellent work!

[Kacie Delane Davis]

Well thank you.

[Rhea752]

The lack of superfluos detail makes this so much better. The key words only. This makes the message stronger and more powerful. Keep writing.

[Ethale Captor]

And this is only the tip of the ice berg in an asylum. Excellent write.

[Enid Blake]

Dark. Is this an Asylum or hell? ;) I like it.

[Kacie Delane Davis]

perhaps both