Dreamer

short as always... one step away from the depression hole.

at night i dream
of such beautiful things
of flesh and heat
of the one i hold so close
of wandering eyes
of swolen lips
and clashing tongues

 

but not my own
never my own

 

watching every movement
every look to cross his face
every sweet breath and soft sigh
for another
silent death of my mind

 

i beg for it
to be blind
to be deafened to his voice
to never see what i hold so close again

 

torturous dreams
i loath this beautiful betrayal

 

Author's Note

as usual you hav questions then ask n ill answer.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow very bittersweet... often to dream of being in someone else's shoes is a great escape from reality but can also bring on envy. Short but very powerful words.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! This was beautiful..
The plot was exceptionally brilliant but the structure was not lucid :(
I think so that you should work on the structure, since it was very raw..
But overall, a great write :)

[Clockwork]

Well structure may help it out a little. I think it stands pretty well and speaks even better, but something more could be there. So on top of seeing it happen we could feel it happen.