The World beneath Us

A mental or physical place you decide...

 

To see the forgotten, where history survives.

Breathless and frightened and swallowed alive.

Decisions misplaced and paths often lost.

No option of sinking, mind set cold as frost.

This is the place where light cannot follow.

A space in the rift of this world that’s all hollow.

No time to think no time to waste.

Limited options of movement and space.

Full of the lost and forgotten impressions,

of life of the past evolutions expression

Nothing can change or evolve to adapt.

For what brought forth pain to the light is inapt.

Silence is sound in this place we can’t reach.

Violence is bound and unseen when that deep.

This is the voice of "the ocean floor" that speaks

This is the voice of "emotions" on the mind of a freak

The darkest and calmest of this world in one piece

A world far from life of the lights war and peace

A world far from light with a minds path to cease

 

Though nothing is common in thought.
Expressing in writing has taught
That the earth has much meaning to mind

As mind has much meaning to find....not earth.

Author's Note

comments?

Reviews

[ANNA]

I so didn't mean to put woman...lol so sorry!! Kenneth..Forgive me!! Sorry man

[ANNA]

You gave a great deal of equistite and power message here. Just about blow me off my chair!! lol
You always have to most beautiful and powerful thoughts to the pager. I can learn a great deal from you. You apply rhymes in creative ways and stoies an a untouchable way as well!! Wonderful write woman!!

Much love n respect,
Anna

[Blackbirdsong]

I like the thoughts you express you here a great deal, however the meter that you establish throughout you stop using towards the end and that felt a little off to me as far as structure is concerned. The thoughts you express are detailed exquisitely.

[San Herman Lopez a.k.a...]

Very interesting write... I would love to see it developed a little further... By the way cool pic, I see you were featured on Entertainment. I personally never heard of ya but kudos!