FOOD

FOOD

A Poem by ♪The Girl Next Door♪
"

Me and food. We go waaay back XD

"

Doughtnuts, so puffy and sweet,

Cupckaes, no other can beat

Cookies, we'll be together til the end

Crescents, one of my best friends

 

Brownies, so choclatey good

Cream puffs, I don't think I should

Lemon bars, so tangy and tart

Cinnamon rolls, till death do us part

 

Pastries are my life,

but there is much more to see

for what cuts with a knife

what's juicy is in my sight

that's where I want to be

 

Fried chicken, so cripsy with salt

Sirloin steak, drives me to a halt

Cheese burgers, you complete me

Ham, it's you I want to see

 

But most amazing of all

My biggest down fall

Is bacon, so fatty and crisp

an opprotunity, I won't miss

 

Moving right along,

Love is in the air

Nature's singing her song,

So sweet and savory, it's where I belong

It's so good, I refuse to share

 

Apples, red and green

Strawberries, best fruit I've ever seen

Bananas, soft and light

Grapes, make my day bright

 

Pomegranites, sweet and sour

Avacados, they've got the power

Pears, melt-in-my-mouth smooth

Cherries, always a good move.

 

Just don't bring up the garden

it's where the demons lurk

my heart, I harden

my gags, you'll have to parden

because vegetables are the devil's work !

 

So much more food I've yet to name

if you love eating, don't feel ashamed.

I'm so hungry, I'm starving to death!

I'll always crave food, till my very last breath.

 

 


© 2012 ♪The Girl Next Door♪



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♪The Girl Next Door♪
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Yummy!

Posted 4 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

4 Years Ago

Haha, thank you :)
Your making me hungry!!
very good poem I think I want a doughnut now

Posted 5 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

Haha! Same here :P thanks for the review!
Now I'm hungry...I like how you get to the healthy side of food too. Recently I lost around 50 pounds in college going on a health food binge and I've never been more fit. It's great that you included the really good foods too like fruit (though I love veggies too but I'm weird like that). Only thing I have to dock points for is a few spelling errors.

Posted 5 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

Yeah I'm not the greatest speller sorry :S
But anyway, thanks for the great review! And good o.. read more
Gosh, that was amazing, childish, very well written and I loved every rhyme, the sound is perfect !!
Just ... right now, you've made me so hungry xD

Posted 5 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

Haha! Thank you very much :D
Bahaha.

Why are you people on the internet so awesome? Seriously. Please leave some awesomeness for the rest of us.

I'd be hungry, but I ate too much buttery popcorn and my stomach hurts. :/

Sad day.

But this is wonderful. Witty, humorous, and honest. Me gusta :p

Seriously though. 100/100

Posted 5 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

:P of course you did. Pure awesomeness cannot be contained nor denied! XD
Beck

5 Years Ago

Haha true, true. :D
♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

:3
that was amazing

Posted 5 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Rachael32123

5 Years Ago

umhum
now i know why this was in the top writing column..absolutely mouthwatering:-):-P.


Posted 5 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

Haha! Thank you :)
Dangit Kenz. You made me hungry all over again. Anyways, love the use of rhyming. Great read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


aisling virginia

5 Years Ago

ya X3
♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

=]
aisling virginia

5 Years Ago

:D
I am soooooooo hungry right now, and there is absolutely no food at my boyfriends house. He is sleeping on the couch next to me right now, he got off work not too long ago, and is beat. I know that he has a business to run and manage, but you would think he would at least be able to keep carrot sticks or something. The hunger pains are terrible!!!!!!! No, offense, of course to my love. ( to you, babe, I have got to say you deserve it, so.... Little offense Intended) too bad I love the guy!!!! But honestly, I would have it no other way! Wait! I lied, I would prefer that he had some food.

Posted 5 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

Hah
I feel hungry to hear about so many tasty and crispy food.
I feel angry to learn that for a diabetic they are not good.

Wonderful work.
You won 100/100

Posted 5 Years Ago



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