Simply Be

Simply Be

A Poem by ♪The Girl Next Door♪
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A random poem I wrote in school. I'm not quite sure what it means yet. Sometimes, for me, writing is kind of like dreaming. First you have the dream, then you try to figure it out after.

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© 2012 ♪The Girl Next Door♪



Author's Note

♪The Girl Next Door♪
Waiting is hard to do when you can't sit still
Making a childish heart wait for the next thrill
Maybe I can fill that space
Maybe I can write that page
Maybe I can leave this place
Maybe- if not for the hinder in age.

Loving people for the sake of love is the hardest thing to do
While the world sees in bright yellows, all I see is deep blue.
But while gazing through the night's eyes
They led me to a somewhat astounding surprise.
Other night people, some the same as me.
But sadly, there is no place where I may simply be.

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A beautiful step, towards lovely phases of life......!!!! with a literal truth in the last line
feels like the one voice from different souls...!!!
very well done..!!! :)
with best wishes,
saumya

Posted 4 Years Ago


it's a morning wake up call for me > Loving people for the sake... an amazing lyrical thought.

Posted 4 Years Ago


it's a morning wake up call for me > Loving people for the sake... an amazing lyrical thought.

Posted 4 Years Ago


it's a morning wake up call for me > Loving people for the sake... an amazing lyrical thought.

Posted 4 Years Ago


it all leads up to the last line, that's what really sells it for me

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love it.
Beautiful imagery, relatable subject.
Great write!


Posted 5 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

Thanks!
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Mir
This was extremley well written, and I enjoyed reading it a lot! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
I really think this is a great poem :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
SmileBig :)

5 Years Ago

Sure, no problem :)
♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

:)
a simple sweet melody as i find it m'lady.

Posted 5 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

Well thank you, kind sir :)
MrOldFashioned

5 Years Ago

you are quite welcome my dear.
Puts across the inner feelings of someone who does not, or can not conform to the artificially structured constraints we find our selves placed in. I like it a lot.

Posted 5 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :)

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