Midnight Scowl

Midnight Scowl

A Poem by ♪The Girl Next Door♪
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Kind of a mysterious, heavy, painfully sad type of thingy.

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The rage flosting wiht the leaves, like bats

Striking at things they don't like, don't understand

Miscommunication lingers like the sly black cats

Macabre illusions seem to claim the upperhand.

 

Mystery shrouded with fear, look away

Don't let the shaking trees claim your sanity

The piercing shreiks cloud the moon's ray

Love replaced with scars, cheers filled with sour vanity

 

The pain that night, the blood shed in bloom

The tearing excuses, the tears filled with horrid surprise

Was that beast destined for a bullet since the womb?

Or was my dark lonely funeral what left tears in your eyes?


© 2013 ♪The Girl Next Door♪



Author's Note

♪The Girl Next Door♪
Thanks for reading :) Please review honestly <3

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Aaahhhhhh!!!! This is such a good poem. I have no words honestly. I tell you again and again how talented you are and now it's starting to lose its meaning xD anyway, absolutely love it. The imagery is amazing and I am still impressed by your talent at rhyming... c:

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

&#9834;The Girl Next Door&#9834;

4 Years Ago

Lol thanks chicky :3
aisling virginia

4 Years Ago

Lol no problemo chica! :P



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Only two things- in the first line, I'm pretty sure you meant "with," not "wiht." :P And also, it's "shrieks," not "shreiks," I think. Sorry, spelling like attacks my brain and beats it with a sledgehammer until I fix whatever error it is.

But for the actual poem- it's quite excellent! Especially the ending, which actually made me twitch a bit because it was so powerful.

Just overall, my response is a sort of strangled squawking noise because there's not really anything else to say. It's incredibly well written. Lovely work! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tragic events will always change us, that is why we need to be reborn again and adjust to our new life.

A very cool, poem for being so dark. Excellent work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


&#9834;The Girl Next Door&#9834;

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the review c:
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

Welcome.
Very mysterious, but kind of cool. Lot's of cryptic references. Nice job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


&#9834;The Girl Next Door&#9834;

4 Years Ago

Thanks :)
The Analog Kid

4 Years Ago

YW anytime:)
hate to be that guy but there are some minor spell issues, such as the first line where with is written wiht, and shrieks is written shreiks. other than that i like this poem overall.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Aaahhhhhh!!!! This is such a good poem. I have no words honestly. I tell you again and again how talented you are and now it's starting to lose its meaning xD anyway, absolutely love it. The imagery is amazing and I am still impressed by your talent at rhyming... c:

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

&#9834;The Girl Next Door&#9834;

4 Years Ago

Lol thanks chicky :3
aisling virginia

4 Years Ago

Lol no problemo chica! :P
HEYYY KENZIIEEEEEEEEEEE :D

Oh alright
Honestly
I hated this poem
"chokes"
I LOVE THIS POEM
So depressing, so sad, or am I just emotional? O.o
I don't know..
But it's so sad!
The last paragraph made me feel guilty of something... Still trying to figure out what it is 0,o
AH OKAY I TRULY LOVED THIS

Posted 4 Years Ago


&#9834;The Girl Next Door&#9834;

4 Years Ago

Haha thank you so much my deeear :3
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&#9834;The Girl Next Door&#9834;

4 Years Ago

I had a feeling XD c:

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&#9834;The Girl Next Door&#9834;
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