The Ship in the sea

The Ship in the sea

A Poem by Kevin Andros
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A journey, till the end of the world, won't seem hard if you have 'the one' with you at your side always.

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The times have brought in the winds of change,
It's bringing in the pleasant breeze,
it will never be the same again, 
When I finally get to the crease.

The sail has been set,
anchors are away,
the ship has sailed for tomorrow,
a land that has no sorrow.

I have sailed through some tough times,
rough seas and strange tides,
I have survived many a storm,
and I've never been brought down.

I now look at the starry skies,
and the peaceful waters,
for once, I eye the enigmatic horizon,
And feel my future brighten.

At this juncture, O my love,
I vow to keep you above all,
keep you always on dry land,
And I'll always be by your side.



© 2016 Kevin Andros



Author's Note

Kevin Andros
I wrote this for my fiancée. Cheers!

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There is nothing enigmatic about this poem and, as long as there is love, there will be love poems. It's a subject many can relate to. In the first stanza, I'm not sure what,"when I finally get to the crease." means.?
In the third stanza, I think "and I've never been brought down." sounds more correct. In the last stanza, I keep wanting to change the word order in the second line to "above all." It messed with my flow of reading a bit. All in all though, sweet words to make a sweet poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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There is nothing enigmatic about this poem and, as long as there is love, there will be love poems. It's a subject many can relate to. In the first stanza, I'm not sure what,"when I finally get to the crease." means.?
In the third stanza, I think "and I've never been brought down." sounds more correct. In the last stanza, I keep wanting to change the word order in the second line to "above all." It messed with my flow of reading a bit. All in all though, sweet words to make a sweet poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kevin Andros
Kevin Andros

World is one country, India



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Hi. I'm a Leo Person by birth. ************************ Update April 2016 I am making my slow return to this wonderful world without borders. Trying to be active on boards and adding new writer.. more..

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