Everyday Life...or not?

Stuck in life.... or not!??

Everyday life
Everybody lives
Along perfectly

Day by day
Passing by
Nothing to achieve
Nothing to conquer

Granted opportunities,
Passing by
No one to realise
That the risk is just fine

No one
wanting to
Leave a pattern
to experiment with patterns
Different patterns
Of life

Everyday life
Everybody lives
yet nothing to get
And Nothing to realise

No goal, No aim
Except just to live
Just to survive?

Everyday Life
Everybody Lives
Nothing to achieve
Nothing to conquer

Humanity,
Selflessness,
Truth & Virtues,
The
Golden words,
Lost into oblivion
The unavoidable oblivion of time

Win,
Live,
Fight & survive,

The sole goal
Of human life

Everyday life
Everybody lives
Yet nothing to get
And nothing to realise

Stuck in life
in the
Everyday Life

And Everybody Lives,
But, Nothing to achieve
And Nothing to Conquer

Author's Note

Bad composition... I thought. This one I wrote at my workplace while waiting for work.

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

It is actually very good. It descibes the mundane life we live, just working working and going no where, in truth we get out of life what we put in it. If we don't give life any effort we get these 10 lines:

Everyday life
Everybody lives
Yet nothing to get
And nothing to realise

Stuck in life
in the
Everyday Life

And Everybody Lives,
But, Nothing to achieve
And Nothing to Conquer

This is an eye opening write. Nice job.

[Léo Duval]

Well...good lyrics I'd say, because it sounds more like a song - I can imagine a joyful melody on it - as if to enhance the irony of it all!

[Imperfection]

I do not think this is bad at all. In fact, it is what becomes of life if we resign to what is given to us instead of striving to get more, do better work and achieve what we wish to achieve.
Everyday life
Everybody lives
Yet nothing to get
And nothing to realise
The repitition of these four lines, I think works well for this poem. It emphasizes on what this is all about.
Nice poem. One can draw a lot out of it.
A suggestion I'd like to make here:
Granted opportunities, Passes by = 'granted opportunites passing by'

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Yeah! It is a nice lyrics...not a bad composition though!
Very thoughtful!

[Anarda Nashai]

Great poem for those of us who have tedious "nine-to-fives". I love it!!!!!

Anarda Nashai
author of Despondent
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www.anardnashai.webs.com