It's Not You, It's-

It's Not You, It's-

A Poem by Scene, not herd
"

Humbug.

"

You act all
Surprised
That's what surprises me

This wasn't the emotion
I was expecting
A million dollars you wouldn't give
I'm sick of it

I live each moment
Trying hard to distill it's fullness
You tamper it all down

Memories of you
I sometimes take out to examine
Grimace
Smile
I put it all back

A science man told me
Revisited memories become
Distorted
I should do that more
Often

The lines are all too
Overused
A worn out mat
That still remains raggedly
Faithful

It's not you, it's-

© 2009 Scene, not herd


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Well portrayed emotion, you put alot of feeling into each word. Its beautiful, I can almost sense what you were feeling, when I read it.

Good job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Scene, not herd

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