Bashar

a leader killing his people while all world is watching

 

 

Mr Devil got married to Miss Evil

How would he be like, the son of such a couple?

He is Bashar with his hatred highest level

Who brought shame to all people

If he is considered to be a human

I dont blame him as i blame his henchmen

Who told him, he is a real idol

He is the moon, he is the sun, he is life provider

For Muslims, he is more honoured than Mohamed

For Christians, oh Jesus, who are you compared to Mr President?

Kill those in the streets..

-but they are innocent

No, they aren’t, have they got permission to wander?

And those at homes?

-oh, it is worse..have they taken permission to breath?

But you are destroying all the country!

It is only ours, other Syrians are our enemy

 

Shame on you...security council

Shame on you..United Nations

Shame on you...all people

What if these innocents were westerners?

Wouldn’t tears have been spilt, for every blood drop?

 

Author's Note

Bashar in Arabic means ( the one who always tells good news) really names are fake! this Bashar never tells any good..

Reviews

[JordanLane]

Salaam, I rather enjoyed this as the truth rings sweetly in the ears even if its message is burdensome on the heart bashar obama shaitton there is no difference when the innocent are oppressed and the wicked walk with their heads high

[khalid]

unfortunately, you are right. thank you so much for the nice review.

[Zahra]

Bitter truths, mostly known but seldom confessed. Very good write.

[khalid]

i agree thank you

[Brave girl]

it's a very good peice and i really enjoyed reading the irony in it! good job

[khalid]

thank you

[Brave girl]

:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

"Relevant writing and realistic" worth piece to read.

[The dark story]

"shocked"...it is...i mean...i know i am a kid so i can't express my views in a better way...but it had really driven me by a great sense of sadness and disgust...that very last stanza...most true most true MOST TRUE..i do ask this question to my big sis a lot that what's the un. doing and how can even peole heart's is "so strong" that they can bear all this...thanks for the excellent poem!!

[Undying Glory]

salam alaikum. this was very powerful writing here, and it is a very sad reality we live in. you've really written well here. nice work!

[luviva]

i read this poem firt time round and reviewed but i dont know what happened to my review!!
but here iam again, re-reading it and it has that same effet on me that it had the first time round.. tears threatening to spill! oohhhhh khalid how you have hang them out there for all of us to see, witness there true likeness, pretend to bring about peace through blood shed? what happened to the talks? why the guns and firing every now and again! well done my friend, for showing us what is really the meaning of these organisations. they help yes, an we love it but why the bloodsheds?

[khalid]

frankly those organization have many masks. which one is more urgent, Mali or Syria?they were fast to interfer in Mali while they dont still care for Syria!

[luviva]

u know.. thats just how things are!
but all we can do is just talk about it and hope that one day people get to see them 4 what they reall are!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's a double edged sword which can cut the throat of trust... I feel your expression sheds light on what happens when power is permitted. I only wish for peace. I hope that for everyone around the world.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Well written Khalid..this is very intense!

[khalid]

thank you my dear

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You're welcome Khalid. This is a deep topic which has my mind reeling. Great write. ~xo~

[dunnia]

Very touching and sad...i love reading your writings i can tell they come from the pain inside your heart..good work

[korbuda]

Even though I don't know who is Bashar or what did he do (and I am sorry for that) this poem touched me. And believe me I know what you are talking about. The biggest shame is on us, people for letting them do what they do and for letting them be who they are.