River Side

happiness of beloved is more important

 

 

 

To the side of the river, she had gone

So fast there it was announced...her presence

To the sweet water she added.. some of her sweetness

To the fresh breeze she sprayed.. some of her fragrance

to everything there, she added the bliss

on the water's and birds sounds,

flowers danced with butterflies.

Rabbits rested on the green grass

 

But here, inside of me, feelings of bitterness

 i have never felt enough of her presence

How can i get used to her absence?

One thing dilutes my hard times,

I always long for her happiness

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the good will in the poem. Sometime we must understand the happiness of another to find some kind of peace. I like the desire and the hope for her in the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

This is the most beautiful thing any boy could ever write for a girl. Loved it.

[aisling virginia]

This is a very beautiful poem. I love the imagery used here. Great work, keep it up :)

[de_maruf]

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As mechanisms of social interaction, institutions are manifest in both formal organizations, such as the U.S. Congress, or the Roman Catholic Church, and, also, in informal social order and organization, reflecting human psychology, culture, habits and customs, and encompassing subjective experience of meaningful enactments. Most important institutions, considered abstractly, have both objective and subjective aspects: examples include money and marriage. The institution of money encompasses many formal organizations, including banks and government treasury departments and stock exchanges, which may be termed, "institutions," as well as subjective experiences, which guide people in their pursuit of personal well-being. Powerful institutions are able to imbue a paper currency with certain value, and to induce millions into cooperative production and trade in pursuit of economic ends abstractly denominated in that currency's units.[citation needed] The subjective experience of money is so pervasive and persuasive that economists talk of the "money illusion" and try to disabuse their students of it, in preparation for learning economic analysis.[citation needed]

[Holly Mason]

this is a giving write...you give her her right to happiness
your words are just so well put together
love the description you use is great
I felt her by the river with your words guiding
thank you for sharing

[YouoweYoupay]

These lines smell of the early morning haze, the sadness of the sun for replacing the moon. Yet there is comfort and choicless surrendering with the ripples on the surface of the lonely river. The comfort of knowing that the loved one is happy and well and sane. We feed on nature's beauty and calm, but in return nature needs nothing from our efforts. It's a one-sided love affair. Touching and from the contents of a poet's heart. Thank youf for posting 'River Side'. Keep writing.

-youoweyoupay

[khalid]

thank you for reading and reviewing..

[YouoweYoupay]

No problem, : ) it was my pleasure.

[Kajal Gulabani]

Nice and simple.. Longing for love is itself pure and sublime.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the sweetness of the descriptions in this write. Nicely done.

[patricia]

I especially liked the last verse and the sustenance you find in wishing her happiness.
Great observations captured and a joy to read.

[Leslie Philibert]

I like the poem, and you can be indeed proud of your homeland, which produced so much history and religion, well done.

[khalid]

thank you

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Beautiful yet sad write, well written

[khalid]

thank you