won't come back?

we take people who live with us for granted, if we lose any of them, we start to feel our lose

??

Where are you dad?

Where did you go?

Won't you come back?

Is it real, I'll never see you?

Why left me at your back?

Why didn't you take me with you?

I see  the sun getting so dark

And everywhere sadness flow

Everything is colored in  black

Can't distinguish milk from a crow

If you've left because I am bad

I promise I will no longer be

But just for a while, come back

To make the good back to grow

and if you found a good manner I lack,

Punish me, hit me, but please don’t go

but if it is the end of your life track,

And you are forced to go

Go

But

Take me with you

Author's Note

i really pity on anyone who has lost any dear one

Reviews

[Renée]

It is a part of life..no one gets away from facing...but what gift..you and your father share....
your gift FROM your father..is ..he was a good man worth missing..
your gift TO your father..he is carried in your heart always..
and I wonder..I bet if you look in the mirror you will see his eyes...

[Nancy]

yes I know. I know these feelings so well! I see you do understand my writing. I wish no one had to understand what this feels like, but there is a reason for everything. My experience so far has been that those who have felt this kind of pain have a greater understanding of both love and joy. God gives us something back. I think it shows up in the depth of emotion you put into your poetry.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

It`s so sad poem, but makes your dark feeling go away at least for while...The worst thing in life is to lose the person we love...

[stars are far]

ouch ..this is so hurting inside ..
I mean that eveyone will go today or tomorrow .we believe in this but when we face it ,it is so hurting and make you feel like your heart is burning ...
This was a great piece ..well done

[piggy]

It's sad when mummy's or daddy's die and the crying can go on for all our lives. This made me worry about my daddy and loosing him. I'm almost crying now.

[Dove]

This poem touched my heart, seriously right in the core. I have not lost a parent but I have lost an uncle who was more than a dad than my father. It hurt so freakin bad when he died, I thought I was going to die with him. This poem is so beautiful because it expresses emotions. Its a sad subject and I'm getting emotional just thinking about it but this piece is wonderful and the flow is great. I look forward to reading your next poem.