Mr Fate!

fate sometimes faces you with many troubles at one time

 

So, Mr. Fate, I am here waiting you tell me

What else do you have, in your bag for me?

Come on, show me my page , let me see

You look ashamed, and you really should be

You forgot all, and you remember only me!

All of these books you have written for me!

Books of mourning, sorrow, sadness and pain

 on its cover, you'll see what none has ever seen

 first page, feeling lonely like cat under heavy rain

losing only son's life while he was being born

second page, living in sadness, in that you are keen

third page, joy is away from you, not even one scene

fourth page,death of father, after life you have seen

next pages, so dark that they cant be seen

so, Mr Fate,with all of this, what do you mean?

nobody else is around?or im in your favorite team?

Author's Note

so depressed when writing it that i couldnt concentrate. sorry if you dont like it

Reviews

[Carnation]

Lovely poem. I'm so sorry that you feel this way. Thank you for sharing it as telling others can really help.
My wish for you is that your life becomes all that you want it to, your dreams stay big and your worries stay small. You never need to carry more than you can hold.

[khalid]

thank you so much for the supporting words..

[Frieda P]

Yes, I certainly see the parallels here. This is a hard read, it's so full of pain and sorrow. I'm so sorry my friend. There really are no good words for loss, are there? Mr Fate is cruel and needs a kick in the pants.

[khalid]

haha if you kicked yours, dont forget to kick mine as well..

[Frieda P]

I'm on it. ;-)

[khalid]

strong, agressive kick pls..for both..

[Frieda P]

I'm borrowing steel toed boots just for the occasion, no worries ;)

[khalid]

yess, that is pretty nice..waiting for the good news, on which TV chanel will it be posted?

[Frieda P]

haha, that made me laugh, I'll let you know....

[khalid]

i hope i dont miss that big event..

[Renée]

Never be sorry My Friend... It is Your page..Your expressions of sorrow you are sharing with us...so we know we are not alone in our sorrow.. I see these visits as coming respectfully into Your home...Thank you for showing me how to be stronger in sharing such grief and sadness ...

[....]

Wow this is touchingly sad really, but so nicely written.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I love it! Its really so true and makes you feel the reality...I feel all words of your poem!

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Depression brings the truth out and sometimes frustration.... In this case it's a mixture of both and i must admit that i kinda liked it.....

[Mollie Sue]

sometimes it does seem that all stuff life throws at us is a personal jab and we are the only ones that goes though these things. very nice and easy to relate to while remaining personal to you.

[stars are far]

This was so nice ...sad but yet Perfect
i loved that so much and by the way everyone feel that he is in the top of the gun of the fate ,like fate is just waiting for him...