light

hm

 

If you really want to know

Why im crazy in my love to you

First you have to go

To the moon and ask him why

He tries to be, as bright as you

 

If you want me not to

Be such jealous of you

Go to the sun and ask her

why she is following you!

And ask the stars

To stop winking at you

 

No need for the sun

No need for the moon

No need for stars

, no need for lamps,

 no need for candles

No need for light

Since my light

Is you

Reviews

[EMMIE]

I like how you personify non human objects in this poem, def very creative and unique!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Okay firstly, I love this part here:
"First you have to go

To the moon and ask him why

He tries to be, as bright as you"

That is beautiful.

How creative... how cute, and nice; I really love stanza two as well. Especially these lines here:
"And ask the stars
to stop winking at you"

And there comes the ending... the lovely ending to such a beautiful poem and lovely write. Enjoyed this poem and love it a lot.

[Brandon Mathis]

wow i like it alot check out my poems you should like them!!

[Trish D.]

I thought this was excellent in both image and mind set.

[Melati]

Khalid, this poem is so cute and sweet. Thanks for sharing.

[Renée J. Martin]

So sweet ! ( :

[Katelyn]

This is so sweet and lovely. Stunning piece! :)

[Bidu Ibrahim]

A wonderful and sentimental piece Khalid! The imagery is so effective. Good work.

[Michelle_H]

Wonderful poem! I love the imagery and the message behind it :)

[Everett DeValle]

Lovely sentiment...I have a few lady friends that make me feel so good, with just their smile like a beam of sunlight.

Nicely done.