silly heart

hearts source of pain

My heart
You have been
The source of every pain
That ever has happened to me
Why are  you belonging to her,
although you are living inside me,
Or, at least, you are supposed to be!
I will no longer let you out of my control
I will never love anyone you tell me you feel
you have to obey my laws, to follow my rules
if you  feel you can't, leave me
I can live without heart,
 but cant without dignity.
If you are to leave,
 leave me quietly
 seek another body
so you can freely
do your silly deeds
as you used
to do with me

Reviews

[Angel Shadow]

So much emphasis and sadness in one short poem!

Here's a piece of advice: never put your heart and happiness in someone else's hands.

[khalid]

thank you, i appreciate the advice..

[Lady of the Ring]

ouch. such intensity in such a small space. i like how you shaped it like an arrow that has pierced your heart.

[Cheyenne Harris]

"Or, at least, you are supposed to be!"

[midnight watcher]

love it

[Miss CB]

Loved how personal this feels to you, really enjoyed reading this.
Well done!

[Ramya]

Brilliant work! I love the simplicity and the stark truth here.
Just like you say, wish we could live without our hearts at some point in our lives!

[CJ_Heffner]

This is really good, I love it if I switched her to him it would fit me lol.

[Belle]

I can live without heart,
but cant without dignity.

I admire the speaker for this two lines.

[Suditi]

I can live without heart,
but cant without dignity.
Powerful lines.

A nice honest write!

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

that heart is really silly! the way it was form was creative...nice poem!