hey you...

just for fun

 

 

If you think you are a heroine,
I am the known hero
If you think you are a noble lady,
I am the great pharaoh
If you see yourself as Cleopatra,
I am the brave Antonio
If you think you are Juliet,
I am the crazy Romeo

if you are a footballer,

i am Christiano Ronaldo
If you think you are a meal,
I am the whole menu
If you are a panda,
I am the forest of bamboo
If you are a cheetah,
I am the strong Leo
If you are a soap,
I am a bottle of shampoo
if you are a sheet of paper,

i am the prfect portfolio

if you are a story,

i am the exciting senario

if you are an erotica poem,

i am the dictionary of taboo

 

i am the sun, you are the shadow

i am origional, you are a false tatoo

so

you must know

with whom you come to argue

before you lose the rest of your mind and then no,

other body can help you

to bear the flames of the dragon burning you

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ceri]

Oooooh, burn. Haha, I love the "anything you can do, I can do better" vibe. Flows beautifully too.

[tigerfight]

=) Sounds like something you'd respond with in a rap battle. It is quite catchy; the rhyme scheme flows very well. For the form, I think you've done very well. You should sell it to a football team.

[Lady of the Ring]

interesting. catchy and yet it possesses a childlike quality that i envy you for. great poem

[Gia]

Mashallah

[emrick]

this is nice Khalid.
I like this line (if you are a story,i am the exciting scenario).

[Cheyenne Harris]

Really cool. Original. I love it.

[Kenya Hunter :) :)]

This is great. Your use of metaphors is gorgeous.

[AnneMatt10]

Very original. I don't mind the grammatical errors at all, I was too busy enjoying the rhythm. Well done.

[......]

I clicked on this, cause of the title reminded me of a Pink Floyd song. This is
over the top writing and really enjoyed your poem. Simply astounding.

[Black Hole Halo]

I get a real sense of the ying and yang of this write, nice write, I liked it.