play me a poem

on the spot

sweet lover

shh...

play me a melody

ringing in your mind

play me a soft lullaby

sleep

sleep..

tell me of a story

tell me of an evil sin

committed 

eons ago

tell me of your

 past

present

and future

maybe i don't quite know

you that well

but i might be able to

how will time know?

playing on the edges of this smooth atmosphere

call me

call me..

call me a bird

make me fly in to your arms

i'm blind 

i'm blind

catch me

catch me

the world is falling a part

i can see it in your eyes

the sun is setting

and so is the moon

hold them up

save me

save me

the world in itself

is collapsing

please

do something

i'm falling

falling

to my knees

begging you

please

don't go

we haven't had our fun 

we haven't

...

run

run

shouting to the serene sky

so full of darkness

run 

run

let the wind soar and lift you up 

on her shoulder

fly

 fly

i'm sleepy now

you've done all you had to

leave me here

the moon

is so bright

leave me

leave me here

to die

and think up another

think up another

i must think up another world

for us

they're waiting for us

they want us dead

we've lived so long

so long

we've lived

i need you here

stay

stay

ease my pain

i need you

i need you

erase

erase

erase me

and my being

ahh!

we've soothed our minds now

you've played your rhymes now

close your eyes

whisper nothing in the serene

stillness

we call the wind

hush now

hush now

hush

...

Reviews

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

eons are measurements of time, ions are positively or negatively charged particles.
other than that plus plus amigo. fun stuff for a fantasy riff

[FaeryQueen]

i always get mistaken for that, thank you! fantasy? spot on!

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

many words used here I would attribute to a sci fi or rather out of this world feel. lots of cool imagery to comb through making it less rooted in earthy textures and more of the fantstic. me likey

[FaeryQueen]

haha... i started, and i couldn't stop.. i had to somewhere, o else, it'd just eep going, who knows where i'd end. anyways, thanks for the kind words.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

some times it's like trying to stop a freight train right? NAh, just get out of it way and let it through. Who cares if you run out of pages, right?

[FaeryQueen]

right! i could just go one forever and ever...

[FaeryQueen]

i meant go at it forever and ever, thanks for the great words!