I Miss...

I Miss...

A Poem by Rodney Carlstrom
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A poem I wrote for my girlfriend while she was at college. (There's a lot of these.) I tried to sum up everything at the exact moment of writing it, that I missed about her. This is what I got...

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I Miss...

I miss the way you speak...
your voice,
I miss the way you smile...
your laugh,
I miss the way you dance...
your jive,
I miss the way you smell...
your perfume,
I miss the way you love...
your heart,
I miss the way you kiss...
your lips,
I miss your hand in mine...
your touch,
But most of all...
I miss you.

© 2009 Rodney Carlstrom


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Yeah. I mean, I never really noticed how much I missed them, until I was talking to her on the phone one night. So, I sat down, wrote it, put it in a card and mailed it to her the next day. She was thrilled.

Thanks for the review!
~Rodney

Posted 15 Years Ago


Ah this was really cute. It's funny that you miss the small stuff when she's gone huh?!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Rodney Carlstrom
Rodney Carlstrom

Noblestucky, IN



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I'm 19, jobless and getting ready to go to college. I love to read, play guitar and hang out with my gorgeous, brilliant and all around amazing girlfriend. I love to write. Lately it's been more songs.. more..

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