Then you'll know

When the food will not to grow

And the bees forget to sow

When the rain doesn't show

Then you'll know

When the sun starts to scars

And we can't see the stars

When we begin to resemble Mars

Then you'll know

When dust fills the sky

And earth's species begin to die

When it hurts to cry

Then you'll know

When we can see through the haze

And realize that there are better ways

When we see better days

We will know

Reviews

[Sarah Jane]

This is perfect to whats going on and what I see in the news. Its intense, straight forward. Masculine, which is nice opposed to the soft nature of some poets. I really like how you worked this one and to say it out loud (Which I happily did) it pleases the tongue.

[K.R.]

Thanks Alaina!

[Vincent]

It sends out a strong message. Well picked words, interesting loop, good job there

[Rowan Storm]

Simple. Pure. Clean. I AM IN LOVE. I bow to a master.

[BloodyMary]

"And when we realize that there are better ways
When we see better days"
LOVE IT

[Mark Andrew]

I like the set out of the Poem.
Good work