Reminders

In the drops of the first rain

In the coolness of twilight

I see so many reminders

of how Beautiful is my life.

In the rays of the setting sun

In the grief of a crying child

I see a piece of sadness,

Too present inside.

But again the morning sun

and the smiles of little ones 

Remind me of the day,

after every night which comes.

The pain of an old-age death

shallows the deepness of life.

Ends the glory of a song

which was for years, heard alive.

But the birth of a new one

deepens the shallow life.

Remind us of how

a soul never dies.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the cycle of life presented here...for every sad moment, a sun rises with new life and new hope.

[Kirty labra]

Happy you liked it sir

[Willard Wells]

Very nice, well done. Imagery and flow with great content and beautiful thoughts. A very tranquil peaceful work. Thank you.

[Kirty labra]

thank you :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

So deep....good write Kirty .....life is full of such moments...the griefs and joys.... loved it...

[Kirty labra]

Glad you liked it:)

[Gaurav]

The concept of soul, when we thing about it, brings forth a strange feeling. This feeling, though uncommon, makes us feel good. Only purpose of it is to feel us omnipresent, in plants, insects etc. Good work

[Kirty labra]

thank you soo much