Unwanted Poet

Unwanted Poet

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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A look into the mirror!

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Feeling of no-one,
Doubts in my mind,
Reluctant to stir,
Thoughts are unkind,
Pressures of elders,
Goals in focus,
Wants unheard of,
All hocus pocus,
Mind beckons answers,
Thoughts drawing blank,
Plane of entire misery,
From Billy to Frank,
Hills far away,
Silence he wrote,
A killing stone,
From the angry poet.

© 2011 Thomas Fitzgerald


Author's Note

Thomas Fitzgerald
Simplicity is key!

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Yeah, no one cares much about poets, unless the do something outrageious or die young. Willam Blake ended in a paupers grave with about three people standing there to see him go. And Keats hardly sold a verse when he was alive. Byron of course was a b*****d. Yeah, no one wants us cos we say things that make them uncomfortable, or they are too stupid to understand us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Simplicity is the key and complexity is the lock that subdues the turmoil.

Nice one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its interesting how so little can be so much.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate to these doubtful thoughts. Good write indeed, simplicity showed its capabilities of making a well written, deep piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great piece. The rhyme is excellent and the rhythm is fluid. Love the tones too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very simple, it almost creates its own beat as you read it.
this seems to leave the reader with a feeling of anxiety in the best way possible lol.
very very simple and very very personal it seems. thank you for sharing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like the short word form writes, and this one is a good one, so well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I felt the angry restlessness or frustration as I read this poem. I really like it. Especially the lines "Wants unheard of, All hocus pocus" It made me want to scream in frustration for the poet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice! It is sharp like a blade and hot from anger like a coal fire. So good yet so simple!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I read this because I wanted to... and it's got truth and bite. Silence makes me angry... because it never IS silent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


i feel like this is made of bullet points. created to hash out each reason briefly and then fly into the next. this happens, this happens, this happens, this happens. brilliant.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Thomas Fitzgerald
Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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