Free.

Just a piece I've been working on, a human sense of purpose I think!

A cat's purr brings light to my sleep,

A tussle and coarse carpet I feel,

A man holding whats love to his soul,

A fire does skip and dance the reel.

 

A glass of plump wine sits in my gut,

A mind is swimming for thoughts broken,

A friends is never far away from me,

A truth is felt hard in time when spoken.

 

A kiss has stained my lips on this night,

A touch sends skin to breath the air,

A look of sensual longing eats at me core,

A chase I walked upon to be clearly fair.

 

A door did open a life for two not one,

A window has closed on battered quite,

A house is no longer just curtains and shelfs,

A home has settled on us this dark night.

 

A love of sex and flesh has bound me to you,

A caring smile has locked my heart with a key,

A tired mind will now rest for some time,

A spirit is flying in tandum for it's free.

Author's Note

As always be honest and true!

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

We all have something that if we acquire it, it has a way of making us feel as if we have been set free. I think of acceptance for when we find that one person who accepts us totally for who we are we then in turn feel free to be us. Having that wine in your gut, with satisfied flesh enjoy what is yours in your realm is totally a feeling of freedom and I am glad you have found it within loves touch.

[Tahna]

a fantastic read, original, passionate...

[NightShade]

I do believe that you have transcended Oscar Wilde in every way. I hate to make comparisons but yeah. I prefer your style and content because I can feel your words with more than intellect.

[Robin]

freedom , found in the spirit that seeks that which allows one to be happy

[Mauricio Montoya]

Poetry is always open to interpretation but its also an art and here you've done just that.
Great job, well done.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Passionate.

[Kesha]

This was very full of imagery! :) I absolutely loved the way you formed each sentence! :) I'm glad I stumbled upon this poem Thomas what a great read! :)

[MS. BABy]

I loved the visual of this on The article A being the movement of this piece making the statements definite...I always enjoy u thomas....Good morning...

[Julie Beth]

'A mind is swimming for thoughts broken.' brilliant! i loved it you did an awesome job :)

[Tasha]

Great work, I loved the lines you used.

[Gitana Deneff]

I love it. Absolutely raw and real.