Memorable

The redish face

The perscribed glasses

The brown ginger hair

The high fives given

That I never took

Just a tongue that stuck out

I was young then

I wish to start over

When I would take the high five

The hospitality that he also gave to me

Then he disappered

Author's Note

** In memory of my old tall 3 years older then me friend named Kyle who died of being very ill who didn't mean to leave his friends alone.**

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

That can be such a tragic loss for one to deal with. I'm very sorry for it. They leave a scar on us...but teach us to take those high fives and return the hospitality of another and not wait. Your friend would be proud of you I'm sure. You wrote of the good actions he gave to you. You'll feel him guide you to take a leap and connect that next high five with somebody new. :) I'm just so sorry for this loss. :)

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

thanks

[~ Stefanie ~]

This is sad and I understand the loss that comes with losing a very close friend! his memory will remain with you forever, trust me on that. And I'm sure he is very touched that you dedicated a poem to him :) Well done!

[Shattered Dreams]

This is a very sad poem. I'm sorry for your loss. Hope his spirit remains in your heart forever. Good poem. Well done.

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

thanks guys I was only 6-7 years old when it happened

[Maddie:]]

sorry for you loss, your words were raw and full of emotion. i could feel your pain, even though this poem wasn't even quite long! well-written, again sorry for your loss.

[Julia Mancini]

This was such a touching and beautiful little poem. My prayers are out to everybody who Kyle touched. I am so sorry for your loss.

[Summer'sBreeze]

it was sad
and i love this writing and i'm sorry for your loss